Awesome chapter! I've been super lazy lately and never reviewed -_- sorry about that lol but I just had to review again. I freaked out when they crashed and Ryan almost died but he's alive and that made me really happy. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's response
Ah, that's alright, there are plenty of people that read and don't review. I'm glad that you freaked out, too, that means that the scene did what I wanted it to do. The next chapter is another one of my favorites, probably my top favorite.