slaps herself in the face Ok, how did THIS escape my attention?!
Wonderful literary quality. You used simple repitition as a powerful writing device. Pete can hardly think about anything else but that he´s been caged up for two years. It´s convincing and believable.
This is a great start. I´m still marveling at your beautifully written chapter. The girl´s got talent. :)
You got me hooked so expect further reviews that will leave you both flattered and happy that there´s an ocean between you and my ODDness. ;)
Author's response
You just made my day a whole lot better! Thanks for the long review and thank you for the ego-boosting comments. I definitely needed it.