Wow. It look like someone else is having hee gods as te enemy as well! To cool!
Now, for Hera, I can see where her love and loyalty to Jay come into this, and why she wouldn't want Theresa around him. Persephone seems in character in the fact that she's protecting Theresa.
Poor, poor Theresa though. Now, not to insult you, but is Thisbe a 'real' Greek (I assume) person, or has she been made up and will very nicely fit into the story, as will the man, whose name is like Jay's (afraid I can't remember it though, sorry) Anyways, nice start to the mystery we all await to find out.
Now, as for the Archie cooking in his 'pink feminine apron' and the whole bonfire and gasoline concoction was beautiful. Archie was so sweet trying to make Atlanta feel better, and I bet she only likes him as a friend. Anyways, that was a wonderful ending to this chapter and I eagerly await the next chapter (so update soon!)
Best wishes and Neil's luck,
~Demenior
Author's response
Yes, evil gods will perish (or at least Hera) And that will play a big part in the plot, for the nexy chapter to say the least. And I truly feel bad for poor Persephone, she can't deny some of the truth in Hera's words.
And yes I did make up Thisbe and Jyros... and yes you may have to wait a while on that one. I get into a different issue soon.
Thank you so much, poor Archie... but I had to think of a reason for the thing to go 'boom'. And again I say poor Archie, Atlanta is so oblivious. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I will update now that I've stolen Neil's luck.
-Nuuoa Eclaire