ARGH! My review didn't get all posted. :'(
Continued on: ... Of the second chapter, and they weren't even a couple. But yeah, good pace. Not too fast, not too slow - something that Jon Walker (kinky-bastard extraordinaire) makes sure of. ;)
So, this review is stupidly long, so to save you from boredom in reading my review/essay, I'm gonna end it here with a, "Love it! Can't wait for the next update! :3"
Author's response
Wow. that would be awkward.
Yep, he's fast with his rude remarks but none of them are mushy romantic really, and he doesn't mean it... or I don't mean for him to mean it lol.
Thanks! I love your reviews for this. You're the only one who reads it, lol.