Hey! =D Great story so far. IT is a little cruel to have made Cronus kill Theresa's father but it definitely adds to the mood of your story. It's okay if your translation isn't exactly correct (i'm not sure if it is or not) as long as you made an effort that's all that counts smiles big :) Great job so far! I can't wait for the next chapter. PLease update soon! =D
~story_master