This story completely ruled! And it had a happy ending. Sighs I do that a lot, if you hadn't noticed.
Your writing rules beyond any words that I have in my vocabulary, so rules will have to be the horrible word that I use to describe it. I hope you write more!!! YEA!
As the other girls say DOJHi5 or something like that. I'm not sure if I'm cool enough for this group :)