:O
That was fucking terrifying!
Really intense, man. It was creepy. I'm rating it up, though.
Because it was really fantastic.
AND EXTREMELY SCARY.
Which is hard, 'cause I don't normally scare easily. I think. I don't really know...the only movie I consider scary is 'A Clockwork Orange'...maybe something else...
BUT ANYHOW. My first poem sucked and somehow your first poem is sooooooo lalalala.
Uhm, yeppers. I was just rambling cause you shook me up with that poem. Really fantastically creepy, man.
KEEP WRITING MORE POEMS!!!