Review for The horrible news

The horrible news

(#) StandUpAndScream 2013-01-20

It's so sad :( Poor Gerard and Frankie :(
Paragraphing is your best friend when you're writing.
New speaker, new line! So of Gerard's talking and then Frank begins to talk, you start a new line. Gah I'm terrible at explaining things D:
Capital letters are God too! :)

Author's response

i know my grammar is terrible XD