Review for Triangle Complex

Triangle Complex

(#) Skoell 2006-11-15

how come that harry can leave for the mall alone when he and the girls are supposed to explode when they are more than 25 meter apart from each other?

Author's response

That was a major screw up.
I had it corrected, and in a way submitted the same story again.
I have it corrected here. Sorry about that.

Thanks for the review,

Wim