Review for The one thing I forgot to say

The one thing I forgot to say

(#) aweirdtree 2013-01-27

your ability to use words never ceases to amaze me, seriously. i love this; it's very well put together and one can see how much thought you've put into it. thank you!

Author's response

Thank you! It's actually the first time I've ever decided on a syllable count for each stanza and line and actually worked to stick with that, so I'm glad the effort hasn't seemed to kill anything important XD

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it :)