your ability to use words never ceases to amaze me, seriously. i love this; it's very well put together and one can see how much thought you've put into it. thank you!
Author's response
Thank you! It's actually the first time I've ever decided on a syllable count for each stanza and line and actually worked to stick with that, so I'm glad the effort hasn't seemed to kill anything important XD
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it :)