I love It just as much as I did the other! :) Personally I don't think it needs rewriting!!!! It's perfect either way!!!!
Author's response
I'm so glad! I decided to rewrite it because some of the chapters were really short and needed to be edited quite a bit, plus its making me remember why I fell in love with this story. Thank you for calling it perfect, that really made my day and thank you for reviewing xoxo