Eh Honey that was totally badass! I loved it :D
Really sweet! I was kinda hoping for a great big snog at the end but hey can't get everything you wish for!
SUPER AWESOME job for your first go! You should have seen MY first fanfic shudder horrible stuff... a very shitting attempted at angst I do believe. Something my little 12 year old brain just couldn't comprehend, I am afraid! Four years later and I'm still not sure what's going on in my brain!
You've got talent, kid. Keep it up :)
Xoxo Alexandra