I may be a sad sap but I just literally burst into tears as I read that, then the last line"She was pregnant..." It almost killed me.
I honestly can't wait to read more of this, it's just so sad and heartbreaking and...Oh my Gee I'm rambling now, sorry, this is so awesome though. It's written beautifully
I'll shut up now...
Vikki xoxo
Author's response
Thank you so much for being bothered to read it let alone rate it!!! Im so glad you enjoyed it because i tried to put a lot of emotion into it and ended up crying as i wrote it ;__; but yeah thank you!! xo