Ok, seriously, my adulterated review:
Best parts:
1) Note to self: Grow some self-confidence already, you retarded good-for-nothing cynic.
Classic line, i love consecutive abuse...
2) That filthy little liar. - just the fact you were calling Hatrick this kinda incited me, in a good way....
3) "But I look really good in shorts!" Pete beamed. Yes you do.
4) Oh and blue/black/red pen thing had me kakking my pants. Sorry nots as much as my Pimp in white though! He's got it y'know?
5) Maybe I should get a new shampoo...
You use Shampoo, maybe she should try an industrial product....
6) Gay? Incestuous gayness? - LMFAO. Incestuous gayness is a great great line.
7) Maybe his calves weren´t that amazing after all. - he has the skinniest legs....
Alex, I wanna know where it's going!! Don't keep teasing my plonked up brain.
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Author's response
I wish I had thought of the industrial product. :( Nah, well... Thank you for this review that proves that you actually read the chapter. Or maybe you just p&c-ied random lines. Anyways, you rock. You DoJ-rock. If you really really REALLY reallyreallyreally... wanna know where this is going I´ll tell ya. Via e-mail or AIM though. That is, if the "cb" starts working again.