Review for Harry Potter: Demon Possessed

Harry Potter: Demon Possessed

(#) Akuma-Heika 2013-03-18


"Yeah, I'm fine, Harry," she lied.
Why is she not questioning his red eyes?

Wouldn't Harry become the slave of Hannah since he said the incantation this time instead of Hannah? When Nina said it she became the slave so Harry should have in this case.

Oniichan, calm down," a woman behind him said. She was a head shorter than him, with the same rusty hair with grey streaks. The woman had a modest figure, with clothing similar to the man she was talking to. In her arms, she held a year-old baby that was sleeping soundly. "You'll wake Rayne."
"Mana, I...," the man-Kokennin-said before giving up trying to reason with his mate
Incest?

The children scattered, leaving one thirteen-year-old girl. She was short and thin and had the look of a person who had been malnourished their entire life. She had dark tan skin hidden by threadbare clothes and midnight black hair. She looked up with chocolate eyes and jumped to her bare feet.
"Ko-kun, what's going on?" she asked, falling into step beside him.
"Nothing, Naba. How much did the children hear?"
Harry;s sister?

Tonks flew into the kitchen, passing by Remus and Sirius, who were rushing to shut up the latter's mother.
How did she pass a dead guy? Based on all you said your Sirius died at the Ministry.