interesting story! excited about the next order meeting when they discuss the marriage contract...
well, ron isn't that out of character in my eyes, but hermione is really really reallly out of it...i know you said there would be ooc, but for a girl who began spew (definitely without the .'s) it just doesn't befit to react like this to a marriage contract only to get access to books and money...she could get political influence through dumbledore if he really is her idol, wouldn't she? and how would she become so arrogant? she wasn't liked in her first year, ron disliked her...what about the troll? what happened to voldie? is he back already or not? when yes, how? the stone in first year? or the tournament and through cedrics blood?