Hey interesting story, like to see what happens in the meeting when the revelation of the contract comes to head!
you definitely might want to find a beta, You seem to be right on the edge of greatness in your writing but then you have all these sentencing mistakes and your spelling is bad. You consistantly use words that can have more than one meaning. example: remember when you said no PEAKING, well the actual word you used is for "he hit his peak and he couldnt go any further" the actual word you needed was "PEEKING"