Review for Rain

Rain

(#) MCR-99 2013-03-29

Cool chapter!

(I feel like the only reviewer here...)

Mark sounds cool, good music taste he got there. Stacy sounds like the common girls at my school.

Anyway, update soon?

Author's response

Yep, I'm writing the 4th chapter right now, it's going pretty well.

I really like Mark, and I had a lot of girls like Stacey at my old school but my new one has uniform so it's not as easy to dress like a slut butt.

And what about Laura, the girl I briefly mentioned in the story? Should I include her in later chapters?