i love how the beginning of the chapter went back and forth between how patrick was feeling and how collette was feeling, and how their emotions were pretty much parallel.
gah, and damn andy! usually it's joe who's interrupting. when did that become andy's job? haha
ugh, and she rejected poor patrick? i don't think he bought her excuse, he just saw a plain rejection.
i love the fact that you didn't give away all of her background. it keeps us in suspense and you know i'm a sucker for that. showing her getting defensive about her past means there is something huge there. i'm totally waiting for it.
at the beginning i wondered why jackson calls her "coco" instead of "mom", but i just now caught onto that. the photo album thing was a nice touch.
well, i guess we can thank joe for being such a pimp and getting wrens number. hopefully wren will put the OH in trohmania. hells yea.
anyway, i should probably sleep or something now....
Author's response
I love your reviews! Especially the OH in Trohmania! Sorry it took me so long to update. I know you were waiting.
You are reading into this story very well, young one. You may be catching on to things that are important to remember for the future...maybe...ha ha ha (that's supposed to be an evil laugh, but since I am the "nice one" I'm not sure how to spell it)! Onward to Drama-Rama!