i don't usually like stories of guys been pregnant, but i'll see how this one goes.
ok one thing that really confused the fuck out of me...the last part,
Either of them noticed the small winged figure that leant against their window- and either of them noticed their winning smile, much less how they suddenly leapt off and flew away, disappearing far into the moon, only leaving pink dust and moonlight as a reminder that they were there.
i originally thought 'are you talking about a bird?' then i read about it smiling and pink dusts and i'm like...O_o What?
I literally sat up and laughed out a 'What the fuck??" i read it over again...are you talking about a pixy/ fairy of some description? LOL
i'm not been mean or rude just so you know. Your story made me giggle. it was entertaining. love the bit about 'I want a puppy'XD
lol i'll be reading the next chapter when your done.
p.s. don't worry about how long it's been since you last updated. I haven't been able to write since MCR broke up. so your doing one better then me.
Author's response
Oh haha. I thought people would figure it out on their own XD it's Cupid, ya know? The dust I (shamelessly) took it as a reference to Rise of the Guardians, you know the dreamworks movie 'bout Jack Frost? That one.
And I deriously appreciate that you actually took the time to read this, even /more since you said that you don't usually read m-pregs. You're awesome.
xx
Oh haha. I thought people would figure it out on their own XD it's Cupid, ya know? The dust I (shamelessly) took it as a reference to Rise of the Guardians, you know the dreamworks movie 'bout Jack Frost? That one.
And I seriously appreciate that you actually took the time to read this, even /more since you said that you don't usually read m-pregs. You're awesome.
xx