Purple tomatoe? Tricking Archie with his French-ly ways? Oh, what a cool one-shot this is, and with a great aand origional point of view. Awesome job Nuuoa! I love it, the characterization was good, and using your own abilities/talents to help really improve your writing and make it realistic and believeable was great. Oh my dreams will be stange tonight, thanks a lot!
~Demenior
Author's response
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it... now I'm afraid both of our dreams will be tainted. -Nuuoa