"Hey there, Justus" This was what she called him. "I got a big nut for you to crack."
I dunno, something's wrong with that line but I'm yet to determine what it is. I'll get back to you on that.
Wow, that is certainly one way to get Delilah back in the game. GO DEE GO! She's funny when she's jelous ;D
Author's response
thank you, I'm always pleased about criticism. concerning the story: apathy is one of the worst things that can happen to you, be aware of that.