Review for It All Started With Clay S'mores.

It All Started With Clay S'mores.

(#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-05-26

Aww, this story is so cute! Just be careful with your OC, she seems to be slowly creeping into Mary Sue territory.

Author's response

I can't say much, but trust me I'm doing it on purpose for the moment. As we advance further into the story the character will develop and the reader will learn more.
I will most likely post another chapter tonight. As long as you pay attention to the details about my OC you'll realize... I'm going to stop talking or ill end up ruining part of the story, haha.