Review for War
That was terrifying...which is a good thing in poetry! I mean, the fact you got your point across, I thought it was very well done.
First time posting? Congrats, far better than my first post (don't bother looking, it was like, a very strange start of a fanfiction and it was just weird and short).
But, yeah, man. This was very...intense.
You must be an amazing writer now if that was when you were eleven!
Author's response
Dude thanks! I was always told that I was good at writing but I never took it seriously! Just thank you!!