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Your Living Nightmare
Your Living Nightmare
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lolhai
2013-07-02
Oh! Sometimes describing things that you normally wouldn't need to describe helps.
Ex: "The firetruck drove up to the flame-consumed house"
Better: The red firetruck drove up to the flame-consumed house". Firetrucks aren't always red, ya know :)