Oh wow. I dig this so much. You have a really, hmm, how should I say it, eloquent (??) way of expressing yourself :D If that makes sense??
I just thought this was written beautifully and I love that it's not so out there and obvious or straightforward... Please note, I'm absolutely rubbish when it comes to poetry so I'm probably not the right person to be reviewing poetry, however, I did like this. Good job.
Author's response
Haha, I think just about anyone can give poetic feedback
I loved yours and I bet you're fantastic at poetry
It doesn't take a genius to wrote what is felt
Thank you