In the NEW POWERS you have the start of a great story. My only criticism is that your chapters are only a glimpse into the story. They need to be longer and more fleshed out. This is the mark of a great writer to be able to expand your stories to give the reader a clearer picture of what you have envisioned. As to the flamers, ignore them. Certain people need to tear others down in order to think they are better then they are. If the criticism is not constructive then ignore them and tell them all to go pack sand. Keep up the good work and your vision clear.
IronGray