That's a heck of a place to leave off.
The story's a fun read even if a bit of a stretch for a seven year old. Of course, the whole concept of either Harry or Stargate is a lot bigger stretch so...no problemo.
With a well developed TK ability, Harry would have to miss seeing something coming for most things to be a major threat. Which already happened.
Enjoyed it.
Author's response
Thanks for the review. I hope you keep reading my stories and reviewing them.