Well hi there. Nice to meet you. Now for feedback, I know above ypu said you were in a hurry but I do recommend punctuation and grammar if you want to write things. (Just letting you know because there are people on this website that can be a little rude about it. I'm trying to be nice and so far I sound like a grandma.)
Again, nice meeting you.
Author's response
Thanks alot! Yeah i know people can be rude and no you dont sound like a grandma i appreciate it i hope you enjoy my stories! Happy Reading!