Nice story so far.
I'm always looking forwards to the next update.
I'm missing a little bit about why MacGonagal was in the area.
It's nice to see competent aurors at work.
Author's response
Hello, saas.
Thanks and glad you’re enjoying the ride.
McGonagall: Yeah, I screwed that up royally. I actually wrote that part for another story and when I snitched it, I figured it sounded good. Let’s just say it she was there visiting relatives or somesuch.
Aurors: Having been a police officer in the long distant past, (we carried swords and spears back then) it never fails to horrify me how lackadaisical the Aurors are in canon…and most fanon. That the court system resembles something from the middle ages doesn’t help any.
Alorkin