I am a little suspicious about Dexter. I don't think he's a surgeon.
Anyway... I like the story and I'm looking forward tp more but the one thing I really don't like is how you put the stereotypical populars. Not all populars are like that and it really peeves me off a little. But that's the only flaw I found about it. Besides that it is a good story.
And now for me to freak out. DEXTER! I KNOW YOU ARE HIDING SOMETHING MISTER! I CAN TELL! O_e
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Oh, he is...
suspicious music, shifty eyes