From your notes it looks like you might still have hopes for this story so I will as well.
Starts off nice.
Goblins aren't defined very well. In any case, its your story. Do as you will. banker goblins make perfect sense. They obviously will fight for some things. You know that from the history classes. Otherwise? But bankers don't have to be wimps...or they wouldn't be able to guard the cash.
Enjoyed it.
Author's response
I do have hopes for this story. I lost all of my notes when my computer crashed and until I can get the info transferred to my new computer I won't be working on it.