No offense or anything, but do you have to be with Gerard every time? It gets kind of annoying. That's why I tend to stay away from self-inserts, they're always the same fucking plot. Brief mention is totally fine, just, do not make the whole story about you.
Beside that, this was good. It was sad. Also, one tiny little nag, sorry about this. I don't like repeated plots. I know I've done too many suicide oneshots, but I'm really wearing of them now. Too depressing, and I do not wanna go down that road again.
Sorry about the nags, I just felt they were needed. Someone on here commited suicide the other day and I am just hating suicide.