This is a good story, I just read both chapters there.
There's a few typeos and such but overall it's well written and has a good plot so far.
Author's response
Thank you very much for reading! Yeah, sorry about any spelling mistakes or wrong words. I type this out on my phone so between my spelling mistakes and stupid auto-correct, I'm surprised there aren't a lot more mistakes! Hehe. I'm really happy you think it is a good story! Thanks for taking the time to review! :)