Wow so Remus is channeling the MOB and Tonks is fine with that. I think that is a bit of a stretch and I am not a Remus/Tonks fan to begin with. You write him to open to a relationship that he was very wary of getting into with her. I will say I really like this so far and am hoping you are planning more. The whole Order council is something that is so mastermindish that it is diabolical. I like it. The fact there is potion manipulation and Weasley manipulation is interesting.