Right. So I need to review this entire story but just believe me when I say I love it. Also believe me when I say I am freezing my ass off in the airport lounge at an ungodly hour so I'll do the full review in a while. Right. Let me just say you are the god of plot twists man I totally didn't see that one coming wow. I mean, I expected a good plot twists because you picked a genre close to fantasy and you can really go wild with it and boy, did you go wild. I don't remember in which chapter but I remember that Avery had said that she found it difficult to admit that Frank may also feel the same way about her. I loved that so much. I find it so true and very very natural and it hit home quite hard. That was really beautifully written. For a few chapters now, there have been scattered grammatical errors, the ones that Word doesn't pick up. They weren't that bad and my only advice is to reread your work. I hate rereading my own work but it really helps sometimes. I also loved the chapter in which she tells Frank about how she becomes animal in nature when he touches her. I found that hilarious and sweet and awkward. I really like this story.