hmm...i don't see how you stole or used anything.
anyway, i like this chapter. no, i'm not just saying that, because, well, i'm a bitch and if i didn't like it i would probably...bitch.
i love the fact that she's not just giving into pete because he's pete. i love that she is standing her ground. oh, and i pretty much love max's character. he's so funny.
loved andy walking in on her. now i'm just anxiously waiting on Joe's reaction.
Loveline quote:
patrick: "it's like, in Chicago, my family has been there for like, six generations or something."
Adam Corola: "is there a business you didn't get into?"
patrick: "i was suppose to get into cars, but i know nothing. i'm kind of a disappointment,"
Adam: "does your dad own a shop or something?"
Patrick: "No...ugh, my grandpa and my uncle own like a body shop and my grandpa was the car guy at Allstate, i dunno,"
sorry that sucked. i'm trying to keep it PG
Author's response
HA! I just listened to that loveline. There's some creepy people who call in. It's like, just shell out the money and go see a therapist, leave Adam, Dr. Drew, and 1/2 of FOB alone.
OK, like I said, stealing is the wrong word. I was "inspired" by Joe walking in on P&G doing the nasty.