I've read this before! Leon is so polite, though, it's awesome. Good work.
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oh, you mean how the story popped on feed twice but only one new chapter has appeared? yeah, fixing typos - I honestly don't know why I always spot them a while after posting. I can see a couple still, but I don't wanna look like I'm constantly 'upping' my story..
I'm glad you like Leon.. He can come off a bit hostile at first but he's a bit nervous about all this so it's just an act, really. You should know. As soon as they get a bit more acquainted and sort of slips into each others' comfort zones, I'll be sure to bring out characteristics you'll surely recognize as his :)