FicWad

So that was quite an incredible chapter. You have every reason to be proud of it and slightly scared. It's a really interesting development and I kinda hate Gerard for doing what he did. In general it was a really moving chapter and I love how you did an amazing contrast. They were so happy and friendly one moment and everything looked like it would work out but then it kinda all just went to shit. That's how it happens so often and I relate to that. It was a crazy emotional roller coaster but I am really looking forward to a possible character development for Em. She has the power to be in control of her life, all she needs is the motivation. At the same time, I don't see her making an overnight recovery or any kind of recovery at all (please dont do that, I really want things to work out for Em, but you can still go ahead and do it, I love your writing anyway) All in all, I really enjoyed this chapter and it really put things in perspective. This might just be my favourite chapter so far. I felt everything Em felt, from elated to confused to messed up and drained to just numb. It was really awesome. I'll make sure to read the other stuff you put up and I'll review it today.