WOW. No, not wow...man, no word to discribe how good this is. Very original, very good with emotions, which to me is key to a story, very good discription, exciting, and moving. Impressive. I loved how you got Julius to give Delilah his dad's necklace. You showed how much De means to J. Impressive. Yes, of course you should update! This is very, very good! Please update soon! rates moving and adds to favorites and aww thanks glad I can help. :) Hope to see you on the fourm!