Oh God, I hope you never underestimate yourself as a writer. You're fantastic, I hope you always remember that. This is really well done, and it touches on some personal stuff, which I think is awesome.
Dang sometimes I think I write good poetry and then you and a bunch of people on FicWad put something out and I'm like, "ohhhhhh". You're so talented, jeez.
Author's response
you're much too sweet to me. thank you. you're really fucking talented, Meerah, I hope you know that. you're fabulous. I love you.