I loved it except the Erin parts. I don't think she's a bitch like that. I wish you could've used Stephanie instead or something because it would fit more. Erin looks too much of a doll to be like that haha. Anyway I'm now going to read the sequel! (BTW I hope you'd write an ErinXAxl fic but it seems like you hate her or something :( well..)
Author's response
Oh, I don't hate Erin at all. I actually really love her. But I love making my characters deal with drama so in this Gn'R story I made her a bitch. In reality I really like her.
Stephanie on the other hand...