First of all, I didn´t notice one misspelling... (well, except for the fact that I think it should be "grief" BUT that´s kinda like your trademark so continue with the previous spelling... ;) it´s neat... I write stuff like "ways" instead of "was" and "he" instead of "I"... gender-confused? Well, I surely did some research on Pete for CH so maybe that rubbed off a bit... ;) )
Very nice chapter again, to quote duckapple quoting moocow and adding a little DoJ-ness: It was plonkinger!
I´m kinda relieved to see that Pete let go of Meg so Patrick can have her go with her. That sounds a bit like a sexual conquest thing now. Well, I, for one, wouldn´t mind that... ;)
P.S.: Can I get the narrator´s phone number? (Loved the part about the 10 arms/ really big tray.