Review for Love
Wow, that is just really beautiful. I noticed a few typos , so you might want to proof-read it. Still, your writing style is beautiful and the ambiance of this piece was just fantastic.
By the way, don't listen to that flamer. I laughed my ass off reading all the 'reviews' they'd left you. They're just tragic!
This is wonderful.
Author's response
Thank you for pointing out the typos. I wrote this a long time ago without spell check and posted it on another website. I only copied and pasted it over to this website. I'll fix the typos in the next couple days. And yes, the flamer is rather pathetic aren't they? Seeing as they don't seem to have anything better to do with their time other than flame me. And they tell ME that I need a life!