Review for Potter's Surprise

Potter's Surprise

(#) goku90504 2014-05-11

"Very well I suspect this won't turn out right tonight not matter what we do."
no
"As long as these two do not spent anymore time apart than necessary they should be fine from here on,"
spend
the most time they can spent apart is on the
spend
All I am aware of is when I met your daughter she like me.
liked?
despite the fact there where other boys around she talked to me like I was somebody it was worth knowing.
were ???

Realized she'd struck far hard than intended Emma added,
harder? realizing?

"You identity is confirmed Mr. Potter. May I keep the rest of this vial for your heirs?"
your
Senior goblin Ragnok you presence honors us,"
your
I was also hoping their might be a set of rings in the family vault
there
ch2
After consuming them Harry quick was dispatched upstairs to get the books and paper while Hermione and Andromeda held a quick discussion
was quickly
that one can be in and attend class without being scene by others.
seen
I might be looking a push to take over guardianship of him.
???
... this looks like it would have been one of the best HP time travel stories out there if it had been continued again i would have shared the typos in a pm had i been able to