Review for Children of Hecate

Children of Hecate

(#) dennisud 2014-06-16

Good start to this! I see you changed some birthdays to have Luna involved! and your Ron is being very 2-dimensional so be careful you don't make him too flat in his personality!

Suggest a few other to be their friends, Susan Bones, Daphne Greengrass, etc...


dennisud