Review for The Pride

The Pride

(#) Real-Steel-Kouryuo 2014-07-11

Considering that this story is on two websites, I'm curious which will be continued more than the other. I remember you were posting EroNinja on three websites, this one, Fanficiton and AdultFanfic and so far only on this site does EroNinja has the most updates.

I think for the time being, I'll review the story on this site because this site tends to allow more freedom for the writers than Fanfiction does because of whatever political correctness they tend to have going for them at the moment.

For the story itself, it does have something of a feel akin to EroNinja but that's only the start. The points you made at the end of the chapter does show it can go a different route which would make it stand alone from EroNinja. The key fact in regards to the character Sasuke Uchiha (don't know if I'm allowed to swear of cuss in a review but I do agree with your opinion on him) does set the stage better, both for the village itself and the rest of the villages.

I have to say, all the stories you create, each chapter for each story is worth the wait and the time to read. I can barely wait to see how this next chapter plays out.