I would like to thank you for responding to reviews and comments. It makes it feel that you really do care about what people think of your story. Your explanation did solve the issues that I had with the chapter. I realized that I made the mistake of assuming that Kurama's control of Naruto's sperm was similar to what I believe was Kiyomi's. This of course was my mistake since these are two different stories, I should not have made that assumption. In Eroninja, although it is never fully explained, I was led to believe that Naruto's fertility was like an "on&off" switch. I believe the term "deactivated" was used at one point. This made sense since no one, to my memory, ever mention how Kushina had to keep deactivating Naruto's sperm. I figured it was turned on and off instantly. This makes sense since now that Naruto has no one inside him to alter his biology he would have to do it himself unless the switch is already off. I see now that this is not the case here and each "shot" has to be altered. This makes Kurama's actions with Sakura more believable. Where before i thought he did it on a whim, now it seems to be a precautionary action. This does bring an interesting aspect to Kurama's character in that despite being a powerful,immortal, bijuu it can make mistakes. In this case made a very risky bet and it failed. I would like to think that Kurama didn't alter Naruto's sperm until it found out that it was going to the hospital. It hoped that Sakura would go out of her way to be the one to administer the examination. It also shows that Kurama didn't have the foresight to think that on the off chance Sakura didn't administer it that another women would fall to Naruto's enhanced Pheromones. I think this sort of gives Kurama and interesting aspect that I didn't see before. Although this may just be me reading too much into it since i had a six hour drive today with nothing else to think about. I guess if there was any thing left to say is that maybe in future chapters explanations of how things work in the universe you made would be appreciated. It would stop me from making false assumptions based on previous works. Also i agree with the gender neutral thing. It was a lazy oversight on my end. I hope these discussions will persuade you to maybe put out a second chapter earlier.