Review for The Pride

The Pride

(#) Europefan01 2014-07-15

Hola mi amingo, I can see why this new series take an beginning phase as I read it closely.

Later

P.S: plums, you're an idiot. Did you not know that TLS is a Naru/Saku fan, huh? Check his Devianart page while you at it! Another thing, Naruto did not act like an idiot, while he's with Tsunade handling his report and Sakura truly wanted to be with Naruto after seeing Sasuke what he truly was and determined to make up for her past mistakes! Oy, quit being an imbecile and start re-read this chapter, to the next where Naruto begin to start his journey with Sakura, Hinata and Shizune joining him in the process.

Moreover, TLS's version is way better than Kishi-baka's version to the point where I always enjoy with so much appreciation. Like his A+ story Eroninja, he based everything on real life situations and events that attract open minded readers like myself. Unlike Kishi-baka and most Fanfic authors, TLS knows that Character Development is always a must when it comes to interactions with the characters in a very good way. Not to mention the bad where some characters starting to do evil things that makes the Main Character fight for what is right for himself and his love ones.

So next time when you read TLS's second masterpiece and Eroninja itself, LEARN to use common sense to read and see the difference between his version and Kishi-baka's and why he is very different from other authors when it comes to excellent storytelling.