Review for breath of tomorrow

breath of tomorrow

(#) Mirazal 2015-03-07

this is really interesting and pretty different from everything else you've posted, and i like it a lot.

Author's response

MIR BABY MAN HOW ARE YOU WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN OR HAVE I BEEN SOMEWHERE AHHH MIR!!!!!!

ah, thank you dude! i'm glad it's different, i was trying to make it sound like a backwoods southern speak. actually, screw that, i have no idea what i was trying for. i did one of the magnet found poem things and there's a story in this poem that's kinda like, hard to see with all the poor grammar? but yes, thank you so much, dude! are you back??